Digital Revision Log

I was actually really pleased with the digital version of my blog, so I didn’t change much. Mostly, I went through what my classmates wrote down when I was doing my presentation and used those comments to shape the minimal changes I made.

First of all, I changed the fact that I spoke to the pinpointed members of our class and broadened the audience to people that might stumble across my blog and have no idea what I’m talking about. The Internet is forever, and all kinds of people might find what I’ve written. They don’t have the same knowledge that I do, though, so I had to remember to speak in an all-encompassing voice.

Someone, in their comments from my presentation, mentioned that it would be interesting to focus on the psychological effects that visual media had on its audience. I talked about it briefly in my paper, but I don’t think that I mentioned it in my blog post. So, I incorporated a few aspects of that as well.

If you click here, you can find my digital revision log.

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